Finished Magazine Review/Article

After another group deliberation and feedback we decided that our draft magazine review though colourful, was not professional. We were aiming for an article similar to that displayed by Empire or Total Film, and because of our split page and colour background it looked amateurish and suitable for a children's magazine. Magazines such as Empire do not use coloured backgrounds, rather the Classic White.

You can also see that we have used different pictures and our layout is more colloquial and clear compared to the draft which raped around the characters body and made the review hard to follow. We have also kept font colour to black rather than yellow, as magazines do not tend to go into specific colours which denote the film talked e.g the film poster displays yellow font, but a magazine does not carry this out because it is not affiliated with the film directly - it is just the audience.

We have also added a magazine edition date, a magazine name, page and other ways if accessing the magazine. All of these hold professional qualities and without them we would not be able to pick up that it was a magazine nor a review.