Rough Cut #1

Having finished editing the first draft of our full edit (link in the next post). We have come to the conclusion that there is no actual explanation as to what the 'sockman' actual does. There is also a scene that we believe needs to be re-filmed as it does not match the story in the correct way - this is when 'Paul' is explaining the movement of the sockmonster; there has however been mixed opinions over it. One critique was that it disconnected from the other parts of the film. Another said that they liked the scene because it demonstrated 'Paul' being mentally unstable.